Writing

Here are a few examples of writing from class recently

The Bendigo Adventure

Late one Autumn at school, Monty, Carter, Aimee and I set off after snack in Bernie’s white truck with Mrs Allison and Bernie; in a convoy with the others in Room 7. We turned right into Bendigo on a dusty road, leaving Tarras behind. We drove up the hill of Bendigo. We twisted and turned up the hill until we got to Welshtown. All that was there were old broken down miners huts. We walked down the hill towards Logantown. We walked past mine shafts and the blacksmiths hut. We sketched it. We set off towards the Matilda battery, we threw stones down it and counted the time it took to get to the bottom. We finally got to Logantown and      settled down for lunch.
 By MacKenzie

Have you ever felt winter?

Of course you have


I remember that time
Having hot chocolate in bed
Waking up and eating porridge
Putting on ski gear
Skiing down TC, doing jumps along the way
That was Winter

I remember that time
TC had a powder day
Fog smudged the landscape
Cold snow fell from the sky

The grass freezes and turned white
That was Winter


By Corin