Here are a few examples of writing from class recently
The Bendigo Adventure
Late one Autumn at school, Monty, Carter, Aimee and I set off
after snack in Bernie’s white truck with Mrs Allison and Bernie; in a convoy
with the others in Room 7. We turned right into Bendigo on a dusty road,
leaving Tarras behind. We drove up the hill of Bendigo. We twisted and turned
up the hill until we got to Welshtown. All that was there were old broken down
miners huts. We walked down the hill towards Logantown. We walked past mine
shafts and the blacksmiths hut. We sketched it. We set off towards the Matilda
battery, we threw stones down it and counted the time it took to get to the
bottom. We finally got to Logantown and settled down for lunch.
By MacKenzie
Have you
ever felt winter?
Of course
you have
I remember
that time
Having hot
chocolate in bed
Waking up
and eating porridge
Putting on
ski gear
Skiing down
TC, doing jumps along the way
That was
Winter
I remember
that time
TC had a
powder day
Fog smudged
the landscape
Cold snow
fell from the sky
The grass freezes
and turned white
That was
Winter
By Corin